The Former world champion sprinter Tyson Gay's 15-year-old daughter has been murdered in a shooting in the US state of Kentucky, police say.
Police in Lexington,kentucky said Trinity Gay was shot in the neck during a shoot out between two vehicles in a restaurant car park.
She was rushed to hospital where she later pronouced dead
Mr Gay, Trinity's father, who is also from lexington confirmed her death to local TV station Lex 18.
"She didn't make it. I'm so confused. She was just here last week for fall break. It's so crazy. I have no
idea what happened," which lex 18 quoted him say
In my opinion this is a very devastating story as your don't often her celebrite families being murdered in the UK as you would in the US
This is a picture of trinity gay in her prom dress
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